Worked example · PSE / Well-being · Year 8
DCF: Producing → Creating digital content
A secure Year 8 response: the planning table, the thumbnail that came before the poster, and the finished poster itself. Show the planning at the start if the class is stuck on headlines, but keep the finished poster back until pupils have drawn their own thumbnail — it is a strong design and they will copy it.
1. Be Safe Online — rejected: says nothing, could be about anything.
2. Protect Your Personal Credentials — rejected: a seven-year-old does not know “credentials”.
3. Keep Your Password Secret — chosen: four words, one instruction, every word is one a Year 3 pupil already uses.
Shows the rejected options and the reason for each. The headline is four words and pitched at the audience, not at the designer.
| My topic | Keeping your password secret |
|---|---|
| My headline | Keep Your Password Secret (4 words) |
| Advice 1 | Never tell anyone your password. |
| Advice 2 | Use three words joined up, like BlueDragonCake. |
| Advice 3 | Log out when you finish. |
| Call to action | Not sure? Tell a trusted adult. |
| My three colours, and which is the background | Dark navy background, yellow, white. The navy is the background because dark backgrounds with pale text stay readable even if the printer is low on toner. |
| One word I have deliberately avoided | “Credentials”. Also “authentication” and “secure” — none of them mean anything to a seven-year-old. |
Every piece of advice is an instruction starting with a verb, and the colour choice is justified by how the poster will actually be printed. Advice 2 gives a worked example of a passphrase instead of just saying “make it strong”.
Positions and relative sizes were decided before any lettering was drawn. The size order runs headline → advice → call to action → footer, which is the decision the fourth criterion asks for.
One headline of four words, three pieces of advice, one call to action in its own reversed-out box, and three colours only. It meets the first three criteria, and because the contrast is between dark navy and pale yellow or white it survives a black-and-white photocopy.
| Check | Yes / No | What was fixed |
|---|---|---|
| I could read the headline from two metres | Yes | — |
| I could read the three pieces of advice | No, at first | Advice 2 was on one long line and ran off the edge. Split over two lines and the numbered circle moved down to sit between them. |
| Every word would be understood by a seven-year-old | No, at first | The call to action said “Report it to a responsible adult”. Changed to “Not sure? Tell a trusted adult.” |
| The call to action is obvious without being told | Yes | It is the only white block on the page, so the eye lands on it after the headline. |
| Text and background differ in darkness, not just colour | Yes | Checked by printing it in greyscale. Navy stays very dark, yellow and white stay very pale. |
Two real changes were made because of the two-metre test, which is the fifth criterion. Saying what was wrong and what replaced it is worth more than a row of ticks.