Worked example · Welsh · Year 8
DCF: Interacting and collaborating → Communication
A complete, secure Year 8 response, annotated so you can see which success criterion each part meets. Every Welsh block is followed by an English translation, and the whole group chat is translated in the box below, so you can follow it without any Welsh. It is also your answer key: Step 1 is 1c 2f 3i 4e 5b 6h 7j 8g 9a 10d, and the four problem messages are 5, 7, 8 and 10.
1 Megan: Hi everyone! Who wants to go swimming on Saturday? · 2 Osian: Me! What time? · 3 Megan: At two o'clock. It costs four pounds. · 4 Lowri: Sorry, I can't come. I'm going to see Gran in Cardigan. · 5 Jac: WHERE ARE WE MEETING??? · 6 Megan: Outside the leisure centre at quarter to two. · 7 Osian: Lol, Lowri never comes to anything. · 8 Tomos: I'm coming! Here's my address so you can pick me up: 14 Heol y Bryn. My phone number is 07700 900123. · 9 Megan: Remember a towel and a water bottle! · 10 Dan: Who is Tomos? Where is Heol y Bryn?
The group has 23 members. Dan is a friend of Jac's cousin; nobody else in the chat knows him.
| 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7 | 8 | 9 | 10 |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| c | f | i | e | b | h | j | g | a | d |
| Neges | Ffurf lawn |
|---|---|
| Ti'n dod? | Wyt ti'n dod? |
| Dw i'n methu dod. | Rydw i'n methu dod. |
| Ble dyn ni'n cwrdd? | Ble rydyn ni'n cwrdd? |
Mae'r deg ateb yn gywir, ac mae'r ffurfiau llawn yn dangos bod y disgybl yn deall o ble mae'r ffurfiau byr yn dod. Maen prawf 1.
1. Maen nhw'n mynd i nofio. 2. Ddydd Sadwrn. 3. Am ddau o'r gloch. 4. Tu allan i'r ganolfan hamdden am chwarter i ddau. 5. Pedair punt. 6. Mae hi'n mynd i weld Mam-gu yn Aberteifi. 7. Tywel a photel ddŵr.
English gloss: 1. They are going swimming. 2. On Saturday. 3. At two o'clock. 4. Outside the leisure centre at quarter to two. 5. Four pounds. 6. She is going to see Gran in Cardigan. 7. A towel and a water bottle.
Atebion byr a chywir, ac mae'r treigladau o'r sgwrs wedi'u cadw: ddydd Sadwrn, ddau o'r gloch, photel ddŵr. Mae ateb 3 (dau o'r gloch) ac ateb 4 (chwarter i ddau) yn wahanol, ac mae'r disgybl wedi sylwi. Maen prawf 2.
| Rhif | Beth yw'r broblem? | Beth ddylai ddigwydd? |
|---|---|---|
| 5 | All capitals and three question marks reads as shouting, even though Jac only wanted to know where to meet. | Ask normally: “Ble dyn ni'n cwrdd?” Nobody needs to shout in a group of friends. |
| 7 | It makes fun of Lowri in front of 23 people, straight after she said sorry and gave a good reason. | Osian should delete it and say sorry. Nobody else should like it or join in. |
| 8 | Tomos has posted his home address and phone number to 23 people, and he does not know all of them. | Delete it from the group and send the details privately to Megan, who is organising. |
| 10 | Dan knows none of them, yet he is asking who Tomos is and where he lives. | Nobody answers Dan. Tomos tells a parent or another adult he trusts, and Jac asks whoever runs the group to remove Dan. Report the account if the questions carry on. |
Mae'r pedair problem wedi'u darganfod, ac mae pob ateb yn dweud beth ddylai ddigwydd, nid dim ond beth sy'n bod. Mae'r ateb i neges 10 yn cynnwys dweud wrth oedolyn. Maen prawf 3.
(a) Grêt, dw i'n dod! Pryd dyn ni'n gorffen?
(b) Dim problem, Lowri! Mwynha gyda Mam-gu yn Aberteifi. Wela i di ddydd Llun.
(c) (neges breifat) Tomos, plîs dilea dy gyfeiriad a dy rif ffôn o'r grŵp. Mae 23 person yn y grŵp a dydyn ni ddim yn nabod pawb. Anfona fe at Megan yn unig.
(d) Diolch, Megan! Wela i di ddydd Sadwrn. Hwyl!
English gloss: (a) Great, I'm coming! When do we finish? (b) No problem, Lowri! Enjoy your time with Gran in Cardigan. See you on Monday. (c) (private message) Tomos, please delete your address and your phone number from the group. There are 23 people in the group and we don't know everyone. Send it to Megan only. (d) Thanks, Megan! See you on Saturday. Bye!
Mae pob neges yn gwneud y dasg: cwestiwn, caredigrwydd i Lowri, a neges breifat, gwrtais i Tomos sy'n rhoi rheswm. Mae'r treigladau ar ôl dy yn gywir: dy gyfeiriad, dy rif. Maen prawf 4.
| Cyfarchiad | Bore da, |
|---|---|
| Cwestiwn 1 (ar agor?) | Ydych chi ar agor ddydd Sadwrn am ddau o'r gloch? |
| Cwestiwn 2 (faint?) | Faint mae'n costio i bedwar person? |
| Diolch ac enw | Diolch yn fawr, Jac |
English gloss: Good morning, / Are you open on Saturday at two o'clock? / How much does it cost for four people? / Thank you very much, Jac
Mae'r neges yn defnyddio chi (Ydych chi), brawddegau llawn heb iaith tecstio, a'r treiglad cywir ar ôl i: i bedwar person. Maen prawf 5.