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Taflen dwristiaeth: Castell Caerffili

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What this is

A secure Year 7 leaflet, drawn as it would look folded, annotated so you can see which success criterion each part meets. The full English translation of the leaflet is printed underneath it so you can check the facts without any Welsh. Every fact comes from the Cadw facts box on the worksheet; nothing is invented.

Cam 1 — y cynllun

Pwy yw'r darllenyddTeulu â phlant 8 i 12 oed, ar wyliau yn ne Cymru am wythnos, yn chwilio am rywbeth i'w wneud ar ddiwrnod gwlyb.
Y pum ffaith rwy'n eu dewis1268 a Gilbert de Clare · ofn Llywelyn ap Gruffudd · y castell mwyaf yng Nghymru · 30 erw o amddiffynfeydd dŵr, tair gwaith y stadiwm · y tŵr cam
Y ffaith sy'n mynd ar y clawr, a pham"Y castell mwyaf yng Nghymru." Mae'n hawdd ei deall mewn eiliad, ac mae'n gwneud i deulu feddwl bod digon yma i lenwi prynhawn.
Slogan"Cadarnle mewn llyn" — tri gair.

Mae'r darllenydd wedi'i ddewis yn gyntaf, ac mae'r pum ffaith a'r slogan yn ffitio'r teulu hwnnw. Maen prawf 4.

Y daflen, wedi'i phlygu

CASTELL CAERFFILI Cadarnle mewn llyn Y castell mwyaf yng Nghymru a'r ail fwyaf ym Mhrydain, ar ôl Windsor. Yng ngofal Cadw Panel 1: y clawr Castell a godwyd mewn ofn Yn 1268 dechreuodd Gilbert de Clare, arglwydd y Mers, godi'r castell hwn. Nid oedd amser i'w wastraffu: roedd Llywelyn ap Gruffudd, Tywysog Cymru, yn tyfu'n gryfach bob blwyddyn. Ceisiodd Llywelyn ei ddymchwel ddwywaith cyn iddo gael ei orffen. Methodd bob tro. Ar ôl marwolaeth Llywelyn, daeth y gaer yn gartref moethus, gyda pharc hela a llyn newydd. Aeth i ddwylo Hugh Despenser, ffefryn y Brenin Edward II. Y tŵr cam Sylwch ar dŵr y de-ddwyrain. Mae'n gwyro'n fwy na Thŵr Pisa, diolch i bowdwr gwn y Rhyfel Cartref. Panel 2: yr hanes Dod i ymweld Oriau agor 1 Mawrth – 30 Mehefin: 9.30am – 5pm. Gorffennaf ac Awst: 9.30am – 6pm. Y mynediad olaf hanner awr cyn cau. Tri pheth i'w gweld 1. Y Neuadd Fawr, sydd wedi ailagor ar ôl dwy flynedd o waith cadwraeth. 2. Y tŵr sy'n gwyro. 3. Y 30 erw o amddiffynfeydd dŵr — tair gwaith maint Stadiwm Principality. Ysgolion Mae Cadw yn cynnig ymweliadau addysg hunan-dywysedig am ddim. Ewch i wefan Cadw am brisiau cyfredol cyn cychwyn. Panel 3: ymweld Un ddalen A4 wedi'i phlygu'n dair. Panel 1 ar y dde ar yr ochr allanol, felly dyma'r cyntaf a welir.

Tri phanel, tri gwaith gwahanol: denu (clawr), egluro (hanes), a dweud sut i ymweld. Mae pob panel yn dechrau gyda phennawd, ac mae'r brawddegau'n fyr. Meini prawf 3 a 5.

The leaflet in English, for the cover teacher

Panel 1 (cover): "Caerphilly Castle — A stronghold in a lake. The biggest castle in Wales, and the second biggest in Britain after Windsor. In the care of Cadw."

Panel 2 (history): "A castle built in fear. In 1268 Gilbert de Clare, a Marcher lord, began building this castle. There was no time to waste: Llywelyn ap Gruffudd, Prince of Wales, was growing stronger every year. Llywelyn twice tried to pull it down before it was finished. He failed every time. After Llywelyn's death the fortress became a palatial home, with a hunting park and a new lake. It passed into the hands of Hugh Despenser, King Edward II's favourite. The leaning tower: look at the south-east tower. It leans further than the tower at Pisa, thanks to Civil War gunpowder."

Panel 3 (visiting): "Coming to visit. Opening hours: 1 March to 30 June, 9.30am to 5pm; July and August, 9.30am to 6pm; last admission half an hour before closing. Three things to see: 1. The Great Hall, reopened after two years of conservation work. 2. The leaning tower. 3. The 30 acres of water defences — three times the size of the Principality Stadium. Schools: Cadw offers free self-led education visits. Check the Cadw website for current prices before you set off."

Pam mae'r daflen hon yn gadarn