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Owain Glyndŵr: a pretend shared document

This shared document screen is pretend, invented for practice. Pretend Docs, Ysgol Cae Derw, Cerys, Dylan, Amira, Jac, Mr Rowlands, Class 5H, the comments, the times and the version history are all made up. The facts about Owain Glyndŵr are real, but the pupils made 10 mistakes on purpose. Each one is underlined and numbered.

1. The pretend shared document

4 pupils in Group 3 are writing one page together. Each pupil wrote 1 paragraph. The page is for a Year 3 class to read.

The top of a pretend shared document called Our page about Owain Glyndŵr, with 4 coloured name circles for Cerys, Dylan, Amira and Jac, and a Share button Pretend Docs (an invented app) Our page about Owain Glyndŵr Ysgol Cae Derw (invented) · Year 5 · Group 3 · For Year 3 to read C D A J Share

Name tags: Cerys Dylan Amira Jac

You are looking at an earlier version: Today, 10:28. This is how the page looked before the change at 10:31. Restore this version

Owain Glyndŵr

Paragraph 1 · Cerys

Owain Glyndŵr is1 a Welsh nobleman. On 16 September 1400, his followers proclaim2 him Prince of Wales at Glyndyfrdwy. This began fighting and stuff3 against the rule of King Henry IV of England.

Paragraph 2 · Dylan

In 1404 Owen Glindor4 holds5 a big meeting thing6 at Machynlleth. 1404 was a busy year!

Paragraph 3 · Amira

In 1404 his forces also got7 Harlech Castle and Aberystwyth Castle. By 1409, English armies taked8 both castles back.

Paragraph 4 · Jac

Today, 16 September is marked in Wales as Owain Glyndŵr Day. We was9 surprised that nobody know10 for certain when or where he died.

Comments (3)

Mr Rowlands · on Paragraph 1

Great facts, Cerys! This all happened long ago, so check that your verbs are in the past tense.

Amira · on Paragraph 2

Can we all spell his name the same way as the title? Then the Year 3 readers will not get muddled.

Dylan · on Paragraph 4

this is rubbish

The 10 underlined, numbered words are mistakes planted on purpose. You will fix them in Step 4.

2. The Share panel

Cerys clicked Share. This panel shows everyone who can open the page, and what each person is allowed to do.

A pretend Share panel listing 6 people with their roles: 4 pupils can edit, Mr Rowlands can comment and Class 5H can view Share “Our page about Owain Glyndŵr” Add people or groups People with access C Cerys Group 3 · Owner (she made the document) Can edit ▾ D Dylan Group 3 Can edit ▾ A Amira Group 3 Can edit ▾ J Jac Group 3 Can edit ▾ R Mr Rowlands Teaching assistant Can comment ▾ 5H Class 5H Everyone in the class Can view ▾ Done

What the roles mean

Can editCan change, add and delete words. Can also add comments.
Can commentCan add comments, but cannot change the words.
Can viewCan only read the page. Cannot change anything or add comments.

3. The version history

The app saves a new version every time someone changes the page. The newest change is at the top.

A pretend version history list for today, from 10:05 to 10:31, showing that at 10:31 Jac deleted Paragraph 3, written by Amira Version history Today 10:31 Jac deleted 1 paragraph (Paragraph 3, written by Amira) Current version 10:28 Jac wrote Paragraph 4 You are looking at this version Restore this version 10:22 Amira wrote Paragraph 3 10:15 Dylan wrote Paragraph 2 10:09 Cerys wrote Paragraph 1 10:05 Cerys made the document and shared it with the group

Restoring a version brings the whole page back to how it looked at that time. Comments are kept.