Cover lesson · English · Year 10 · Advanced
DCF: Producing → Evaluating and improving digital content
Name: Class: Date:
Print: this sheet, one per pupil, and the stimulus sheet "One story, three reports", one per pair. Highlighters help but are not essential. No computers needed — everything pupils analyse is on the stimulus sheet, and the final rewrite is handwritten.
Run: 8 min read all three reports in pairs · 15 min complete the evaluation grid · 7 min the "five checks" column · 15 min write the accurate rewrite · 5 min swap and mark against the criteria. The stimulus sheet ends with a list of checkable facts — tell pupils not to read it until the grid is finished, or the task does itself.
Collect: this sheet from every pupil. The rewrite at the bottom is the piece the class teacher will mark.
Three pieces of writing describe the same event: the closure of the Old Bridge in Llanbedr-ar-Fryn. One is a news report, one is campaigning, one is invented on top of somebody else's photograph. You will judge each one against the same criteria, then rewrite the worst of them accurately — keeping it interesting, because "boring but true" is not the lesson.
| Question | Report A — Chronicle | Report B — Llanbedr Voice | Report C — aggregator |
|---|---|---|---|
| Who wrote it? Named or not? | |||
| When was it published, and updated? | |||
| Where do the numbers come from? | |||
| Quote the most emotive phrase | |||
| Are people who disagree quoted? | |||
| Is the image what it claims to be? | |||
| One claim you can prove false | |||
| Trust score out of 5, and why |
| What I would check | Where I would check it |
|---|---|
New headline — accurate, and still worth clicking:
Opening paragraph, about 120 words. Every number attributed. Nothing you cannot support.
One sentence saying what you removed from the original and why: