Cover lesson · RE · Year 11 · Advanced

Citing sources in human rights research

DCF: Citizenship → Digital rights, licensing and ownership

Name: Class: Date:

Cover teacher: you need no subject knowledge

What this practises: GCSE Religious Studies (Made for Wales), Unit 4: Religion and human rights, section 4.2.1 Selecting and researching charities or organisations (how their work aligns with the relevant articles of the Universal Declaration of Human Rights), and section 4.1.1, religious and non-religious perspectives on human rights. It also covers honest use of sources, since WJEC’s malpractice rules apply to all NEA work. This is practice only, not NEA work. The charities are invented. If the right to education is one of your school’s current Unit 4 issues, the lesson is still only practice: pupils must not bring NEA drafts to it or copy anything from it into an NEA.

Print: this sheet, one per pupil, and the stimulus sheet “The right to education: Rhys’s research pack”, one between two. No computers are needed. Pupils need a highlighter.

Run: 7 min pupils read the pack in pairs · 12 min Step 1, find the problems in Rhys’s draft · 10 min Step 2, write the references · 8 min Step 3, can Rhys use it? · 18 min Step 4, the rewrite, alone and in silence · 5 min check against the success criteria. Total 60 minutes.

Collect: this sheet. The worked example is the answer key.

What you are doing

Rhys has written a first draft about charities and the right to education. Some of it is his own work. Some of it is not, and his reference list is no use to anyone. You will find the problems, write proper Harvard references, decide which images and words he is allowed to use, and then rewrite his paragraph honestly, so that every claim is his own words or clearly credited.

Key words: plagiarism (presenting someone else’s words or ideas as your own), patchwriting (changing a few words of a source but keeping its sentences and order), citation (a short credit in your text, like (Lamp Trust, 2025)), reference list (the full details of every source, at the end).

Step 1: what is wrong with the draft?

Highlight the draft on the pack. Find six problems. For each one, quote a few words, name the problem, and say why it matters.

 The words in the draftThe problemWhy it matters
1
2
3
4
5
6

Step 2: write the references

Harvard referencing uses these patterns. Copy the punctuation exactly. Titles of web pages and newspapers go in italics; when handwriting, underline them.

Web page: Organisation (Year) Title of page. Available at: web address (Accessed: day month year). Newspaper: Surname, Initial. (Year) ‘Title of article’, Newspaper name, day month. Available at: web address (Accessed: day month year). Image: Surname, Initial. (Year) Title [Photograph]. Available at: web address (Accessed: day month year). In the text: (Organisation, Year) or (Surname, Year). Sacred texts: give book, chapter and verse in the text, for example (Proverbs 22:6). Many Harvard guides do not put them in the reference list.

Write the reference list entry for Sources 1, 2, 3, 4 and 6, in alphabetical order.

Source 5 is an AI chatbot answer with no sources. Why should Rhys not reference it as evidence for the “5 million girls” figure or the Bible quotation? What should he do instead?

Step 3: can Rhys use it?

For each idea, decide Yes, Yes, if … or No, and give the reason. Think about the person who made the work, as well as the rules.

Rhys wants to …DecisionReason
(a) quote two sentences from Lamp Trust in quotation marks, with a citation, and then comment on them.
(b) paste the Lamp Trust classroom photo into a presentation that will go on the school’s public website.
(c) use Megan Hughes’s classroom photo (Source 6) in the same presentation.
(d) use the slogan “Her Pen, Her Future” as the title of his own school campaign, without mentioning Iqra Futures.
(e) write his own slogan for a school campaign, after seeing how short and memorable the Iqra Futures one is.

Step 4: rewrite the paragraph honestly

Write 150 to 200 words, in your own words, on: How does the work of charities support the right to education? You must:

Step by step

  1. 7 min: Read the pack with your partner. Compare Rhys’s draft with Sources 2, 3 and 5 line by line.
  2. 12 min: Step 1. Six problems, each with a reason.
  3. 10 min: Step 2. Five references in alphabetical order, then the question about Source 5.
  4. 8 min: Step 3. A decision and a reason for each idea.
  5. 18 min: Step 4. Write the new paragraph on your own, in silence.
  6. 5 min: Check your work against the success criteria.

Success criteria

If you finish early